Reflection Blog #2 3/17

Writing essay two by using either a picture, clip, documentary or website helped a lot. I liked having peer revision because it helps me a lot. I also liked annotating the clip that I choose; fog harvesting water. I was able to put my emotions in as well as trying to find out their point of view that the producer is trying to show us. I was able to figure out how to write a correct working thesis, it i broad but I believe that is okay. I will narrow down to talking about my hometown, Monrovia or using a neighboring one. I think that essay two went well, it was a little tough writing the recommending amount of pages, but as I continued to write, it came easier to me. I did not realize how much music was involved in annotation and how the producer is trying to make us feel or see a certain way. I think that this essay was very beneficial because it helped me practice my ability to annotate a short clip.