Practice Write 3/8

Some things I would like my editors to focus on is to make sure I am answering and hitting all the requirements for this paper. I am writing about fog harvesting and how huge it would be if we invested this in our own country. I also want them to make sure I analyzed and clear when reading my essay. I think this does fit in with my research article because it is finding a sustainable way to keep our water during this drought that the West Coast is currently suffering with. I do state visual analysis but unsure if I needed to go in more detail or not.