Reflection Blog 2/25

During the process of choosing on a topic to write on something that was sustainable route for a present issue was not as tough as I thought. The hardest part was focusing on a specific issue for sustainable water. I feel decent on writing this essay, the hardest part is ensuring that my writing is on topic and doesn't add any unnecessary information. So far all information that is relaid to us has been clear and understandable. I would like my feedback to be as clear as possible. I also would like to know everything that I did wrong along with positive ones, if I have any.