practice write 2/16

I feel comfortable and excited about my issue, finding a sustainable way to preserve our water. Although when I wrote my first idea draft, I was too broad. I now need to make my topic more on one issue. My idea draft wasn't the best, but it is still the first idea draft which makes its easier to change and help me realize my mistakes as well. I know I do want to focus in finding a sustainable option to perserve our water during this drought, but would it be a bad idea to add alternative ideas and ways to fnd other options? Such as, water filters, community involvement, etc.