Dayna Higashiyama
English 214
February 12, 2016
Draft One for Essay #1
Finding
a sustainable yet affordable way to conserve our water during this drought has
been tough, many failures and lack of hope. Water is key to our way of life and
for over a hundred years have destroyed our natural resources for water because
of mass development where water used to be, over pumping our aquifers,
contaminating many of our rivers around the world and lastly, not taking our
part in conserving it ourselves. We are constantly wasting water whether it
comes to wasteful water usage, not allowed to catch rain water, putting sewage
and trash into our streams and oceans, that’s just to name a few. If we are not
able to find a sustainable route to conserve our water now, future generations
will suffer tremendously and our human existence might be destroy faster than
we thought.
There
have been many inventions, actions that are currently being tested, used or
dismissed for common household use. Some actions that are currently being taken
is catching and reusing rainwater. One law in that has been passed and
currently enforced is the catching of rainwater, which in fact Southern
California is struggling to sustain the amount of clean and useable water to
their residents. Southern California does not receive much rain during fall or
winter, but when it does, the cities allows precious water to flow down the
streets, into drains and lastly into the ocean. If made legal to catch and
harvest rainwater, communities can provide clean water to families and stop
depleting other lakes, aquifers and surface water. Simple changes like that can
improve our drought and hopefully one day we can be completely dependent on
ourselves.
Fortunately, companies can help conserve and produce clean
water for ourselves; we can also do simple tasks at home to keep our usage of
water at a minimum. These simple changes such as using water quantity monitors,
using water effective appliances, not watering our plants daily and excessively
can help perverse more water. Along with doing simple improvements inside your
house, you also can to the outside, such as changing your pipes to an efficient
piping system. Efficient piping systems are insulated in and around along with
being leak proof which limits your household water waste. With that being said,
households can also take part in creating drought friendly yards and gardens.
Putting grass in our yards requires gallons of water and kills off our natural
plants in that area. Creating a drought friendly yard can bring more life, less
water and more wildlife, depending on where you live. These positive changes
can help be a fun, affordable, and helpful solution in finding a sustainable
solution to our water crisis.
Simple
changes can make a huge impact on the environment, the California drought and
in our own homes. Changing the law to allow the catching and harvesting of rainwater
allows simple yet an affordable way for communities to connect with their
citizens and neighboring communities. By adding simple water quantity monitors
and using the least amount of water possible in our daily habits can easily
help decrease our drought a little. Communities and individuals in their daily
lives should consider finding sustainably ways to help our water shortage and
ultimately find a solution to our problem. Being involved just in your home
will help, teaching others and expanding ideas with one another can help generations
to come.
Overall this is really well thought out and I can tell that you have done a good deal of brainstorming and planning on what you want to say about this topic. I think just going through and making your sentences flow together will improve the "ease" of the read, as well as honing in on exactly what your niche is...Great writing!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the overall topic of the essay. It was straight to the point and nice conclusion. I cant wait to read the next drafts!
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